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A practice for web design. The concept is an online clothing store selling teens wear with graffiti and funky style. Don't mind the texture as the design sample, it should be the shirt photos :giggle: Crits and comments are very welcomed!

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Not much changed with the layout but the texture has changed quite a bit and I've added more detail to them. Finished the logo and all the comment about the logo can go to [link]

Used a few photo texture from sxc.hu: the photo on top left, the graffiti on bottom left, the spray dot and a random graffiti.
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~makananjugaseni Sep 2, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
waw..banyak orang luar negeri yg comment...
btw ini mata kuliah ap y?
diajarin codingnya segala ga?

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~shukugumo Sep 2, 2009  Professional General Artist
bagian new media ntar ada kok mata kuliah yg ngajarin adobe dreamweaver ama flash sekalian. Itu ya tentang web design kaya gini, bakal diajarin coding2 dasar sih. Kalo g sendiri sih belajar otodidak, ga ada kelasny (kan animasi) :bucktooth: bisa design web, css dikit2, tapi flash g blm dalemin :lol:

PS: yg beneran dari mancanegara cuman 2 kok, mana banyak :XD:

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~makananjugaseni Sep 3, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
ooo..jadi begitu~
thx buat infonya

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~Councilor Sep 2, 2009
Awesome! Nah ini baru namanya design, tambahan dikit, buat di logonya. Kalo bisa ada gradasi dari gelap ke warna untuk logonya, yang ini masih terlalu flat.

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~ivoryblood Aug 23, 2009
Idenya bagus banget. Aku suka banget layoutnya, terlihat menarik dan simpel~ :)

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~shukugumo Aug 24, 2009  Professional General Artist
makasiiih! XD Semoga revisianny bisa lebih bagus lagi nih =D

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~ivoryblood Aug 25, 2009
Ganbatte!! :w00t:

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~artlmntl Aug 23, 2009
It's a colorful design that poses a few challenges for code. You have a lot of spot graphics and layered images that would require careful preparation to prevent slow page loading. None of that is bad or wrong, but it's something to keep in mind. The design on the screen must also work in code. It's good practice to keep your images in separate layers so that they can be optimized for the web.

It's a bad idea to describe parts of your design as "lame" or make excuses. Your words influence audience reaction. It's better to say, "This is my design so far. What do you think?" Let people form their own opinions.
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~shukugumo Aug 23, 2009  Professional General Artist
Yep, I tried to make a template full of JPEG this time just for practice, and overall looks good, although like *Councilor said that the materials I used is not quite fit in the theme itself ^^;

I'll admit that I'm really bad at making excuses and tend to be blatant about it. I haven't got much time to think about the logo, that's why I said so, but I'll try to be a little more obscure next time :giggle:

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~artlmntl Aug 24, 2009
No one said design was easy :)
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